[KingDiesel]

this is a drawing of am oc in a story I'm working on... well multiple anyways. they all live together on a planet + a moon, (the moon species being more advanced then the planet species) as for a continent I made up called Glacemour, a barren wasteland of. . . well. . . snow. as figured from the name... on Glacemour is a species I made up called Seikies, aka Glacian Bat Foxes. there are multiple packs of seikies, but as for now, we'll focus on the 2 that are the most important. The Sirive pack, and the Clafton pack. The Sirive clan is the most high ranked, and the Clafton clan is one of the lowest clans in the story. There's an order on training/how many prey kills are made/how many useful things are done/how powerful and behaved is your offspring. Albatross is infuriated when he is declined the spot as alpha multiple times, despite having plenty of positive traits to support his argument, he *has* been proven to have the heir for the treasure, not for the point of trying to keep the clan at its' high ranking. He sets out to destroy the 5th generation, (3 year old Owl) to have the spot as leader for himself. Getting rid of Owl succsessfully worked, but her friend, who was not killed might have been a possible subsitute to own the thrown, as Fawn, Owl's cousin had been under the care from the siblings of the leaders. 3 years after princess Owl's death, the leader's second child, Pyroxene had been blocking Albatross's plans to destroy the throne. After several attempts of violence, Albatross ends up giving up, and is dumped to the Clafton tribe by his pack for multiple attempts at murder, and just being plain greedy and stealing. The tribe names might be more relevant if I ever plan on explaining more about Pyroxene and Fawn, but for now, I just want some critique on the ideas/art