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lioness by Kiekx

Artist Kiekx [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 14 minutes
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lioness

Postby Kiekx » Mon Nov 06, 2017 12:03 am

looking for critique!
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xxxx │she/her│blueth
X hello! I’m kie. I enjoy drawing,
X music & rodents !! always open
Xxxxxxxxii for a chat <3
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Re: lioness

Postby Ƈಎ႑ಎෆiႵƴ » Mon Nov 06, 2017 3:39 am

Hmm, I think the layout is good and I love the sophistication on the eye.

Some things you may want to work on is using different sized lines in different places. Bolder lines for shadowed areas and thinner where the light is strongest ^^
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Re: lioness

Postby liiontai » Mon Nov 06, 2017 9:50 pm

      cool style you got there
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