[COOPZ XD]

Please give me constructive critism

[thehornedsnowleopard]

try using less thick lines. it's hard to focus on detail when it's so thick : O

[COOPZ XD]

try using less thick lines. it's hard to focus on detail when it's so thick : O

I'll try to

[COOPZ XD]

Alright, just before I start shoving criticism in your face, this is really adorable :3
OKAY! READY FOR CRITICISM NOW!
1.) try not to separate the neck from the torso, it makes it look like the neck is behind the body
2.) clean up the lines, there's some parts where just some erasing will do
3.) Move back the eye a bit, it's a little close to the snoot. Move it back just a tad, don't move it so far back!
4.) people have already said this, but yes, use smaller/thinner lines, they'll help bring out detail.
5.) work on the shading a smol bit, try and find where the light source is coming form, and shade accordingly, you can also look at pictures
6.) Draw another arm, even if you can barely see it, it makes the drawing just that little bit better
7.) Give it a snoot! If it's a dog or cat like creature, give it a snoot just like that :3 or if it has just nostrils, do that too XD
I think that's it for now, I hope this helps!

Thank you so much <3