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tips on proportions? by suitcase

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tips on proportions?

Postby suitcase » Tue Oct 03, 2017 12:29 pm

is?? head too big?? leg too short??? plas helP?? brok
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby fennekin » Tue Oct 03, 2017 12:30 pm

i personally think everything is perfect!! you have such a cute style !!
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby silentreverb » Tue Oct 03, 2017 12:31 pm

i think this is good as heck, maybe make the eye a lil smaller and raise it? it looks good though
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby Softballpup12 » Tue Oct 03, 2017 12:49 pm

only thing I see is maybe you could make the neck a bit wider? Idk how to improve this... It's stunning!
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby Pansycat2 » Tue Oct 03, 2017 2:14 pm

Everything is fine with the style except for the eye size, and the tail looks broken.
Try to remember the bones, and eye socket when you draw. That usually helps me. Sometimes I get bored and only draw the skeleton and bones
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby suitcase » Tue Oct 03, 2017 2:39 pm

Pansycat2 wrote:Everything is fine with the style except for the eye size, and the tail looks broken.
Try to remember the bones, and eye socket when you draw. That usually helps me. Sometimes I get bored and only draw the skeleton and bones

im not quite sure how to make the eyes smaller while still maintaining the "cute" effect, so any tips would be appreciated
is it the shape of the eyes that may be a problem rather than size?
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Re: tips on proportions?

Postby anonymous.aa » Tue Oct 03, 2017 3:42 pm

ILoveOsomatsu wrote:
Pansycat2 wrote:Everything is fine with the style except for the eye size, and the tail looks broken.
Try to remember the bones, and eye socket when you draw. That usually helps me. Sometimes I get bored and only draw the skeleton and bones

im not quite sure how to make the eyes smaller while still maintaining the "cute" effect, so any tips would be appreciated
is it the shape of the eyes that may be a problem rather than size?

Maybe you can make the head a bit bigger? I dunno but I really like your drawing, so I don't see why you need to change anything :0 <3
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