Forum rules
Reminder: Copying another person's art without permission to reproduce their work is a form of art-theft!

Click here to see the full Art Rules!
Need help using the Oekaki? Check out this Guide to the Oekaki!

Blanche by persimmon

Artist persimmon [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 40 minutes
Drawing sessions 3
4 people like this Log in to vote for this drawing

Blanche

Postby persimmon » Thu Aug 03, 2017 8:34 pm

Chibi of my cat OC, Blanche. I tried using thicker lines and smoothing out the lines after. Any feedback is appreciated.
Image
Image
ImageImageImageImage

Hello ! Feel free to call me persimmo, persimmon, or whatever you'd like ^^ I'm pretty shy, but feel free to pm me if you ever want to chat or ask me about something c:

THmy kalonsart IG

ImageImageImageImage

above picture - Yalue on TH, avatar and other sig art by me│
User avatar
persimmon
 
Posts: 2843
Joined: Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Blanche

Postby apricott » Thu Aug 03, 2017 9:46 pm

hey, this is super cute! i like the proportions you chose for the chibi style, plus the colours are very attractive too!
however, for the markings, perhaps putting them down a little softer would be nicer, like with a large pen tool on low opacity. it could give an appearance that's a little too messy, but you should experiment! for the lines, i suggest messing about with the smoothing setting on the pencil tool. the lines look see-through in odd places, but the pencil tool is solid colour + a higher smoothing setting would cut some time off from trying to smooth the lines out afterwards. :>
Image
Image
it will get better
art cred:
myself for all
fruity, he/him, eest
dreams of gardening
and art as a job

Image
Image
apricott
 
Posts: 2932
Joined: Thu Dec 15, 2011 3:31 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Blanche

Postby persimmon » Thu Aug 03, 2017 9:57 pm

Cookie_Lover wrote:hey, this is super cute! i like the proportions you chose for the chibi style, plus the colours are very attractive too!
however, for the markings, perhaps putting them down a little softer would be nicer, like with a large pen tool on low opacity. it could give an appearance that's a little too messy, but you should experiment! for the lines, i suggest messing about with the smoothing setting on the pencil tool. the lines look see-through in odd places, but the pencil tool is solid colour + a higher smoothing setting would cut some time off from trying to smooth the lines out afterwards. :>

Thanks for the feedback; this is really helpful, and I'll try to incorporate some of the tips for coloring in later drawigs! If you don't mind me asking, what percentage for the smoothing setting would you recomend?
Image
ImageImageImageImage

Hello ! Feel free to call me persimmo, persimmon, or whatever you'd like ^^ I'm pretty shy, but feel free to pm me if you ever want to chat or ask me about something c:

THmy kalonsart IG

ImageImageImageImage

above picture - Yalue on TH, avatar and other sig art by me│
User avatar
persimmon
 
Posts: 2843
Joined: Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:09 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Blanche

Postby apricott » Thu Aug 03, 2017 10:24 pm

MelonBreeze wrote:
Cookie_Lover wrote:hey, this is super cute! i like the proportions you chose for the chibi style, plus the colours are very attractive too!
however, for the markings, perhaps putting them down a little softer would be nicer, like with a large pen tool on low opacity. it could give an appearance that's a little too messy, but you should experiment! for the lines, i suggest messing about with the smoothing setting on the pencil tool. the lines look see-through in odd places, but the pencil tool is solid colour + a higher smoothing setting would cut some time off from trying to smooth the lines out afterwards. :>

Thanks for the feedback; this is really helpful, and I'll try to incorporate some of the tips for coloring in later drawigs! If you don't mind me asking, what percentage for the smoothing setting would you recomend?

the smoothing really depends on the person. i'm a mouse user and i frequently draw lines/sketches with 55-65 smoothing, however to make longer strokes or extra bendy lines i sometimes change to 70-80. i find 90 and up + 50 and below impossible to draw with because i'm too impatient for the former and the latter makes my lines a lot more shaky. writing, however, is easiest with about 40% for me. i've no input about tablet users nor trackpad users though, you might want to ask around for that or experiment on your own!
Image
Image
it will get better
art cred:
myself for all
fruity, he/him, eest
dreams of gardening
and art as a job

Image
Image
apricott
 
Posts: 2932
Joined: Thu Dec 15, 2011 3:31 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest