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Any critique by ToxicFinch

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Any critique

Postby ToxicFinch » Sat Dec 17, 2016 6:51 pm

An improvements i could focus on? some critique please
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Re: Any critique

Postby GoatMomBestMom » Sat Dec 17, 2016 7:32 pm

in my opinion it's perfect you'll just advance in drawing over time
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Re: Any critique

Postby Desmond » Sun Dec 18, 2016 4:48 am

Excessive gore is not allowed on CS. Please remove the blood (especially the blood from the eyes). ^^;
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Re: Any critique

Postby ToxicFinch » Sun Dec 18, 2016 4:53 am

okay the red part at back is just opening from darkness
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