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Dragon (A Work In Progress) by change;

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Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby change; » Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:36 am

I'm pretty sure this belongs in the beginner's spot. This was drawn completely with the pen in Size 1, but that might change when I keep working on him.
I would really appreciate some critique to make him better.
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby change; » Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:57 am

My first edit I did, was about 5 minutes ago...
Added some shadows.
Beginning to think of his colors
Shaped up his eye slightly
Neck was made thinner, which gave it a longer look.
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby LadyDraco » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:00 am

I think your starting off great. MT suggestion would be wind styles, try to make them more similar. Please don't take this offensively as I couldn't even done what you have already. Just trying to help!
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby icykeys » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:16 am

It's very nice. ^^ Though I agree with LadyDraca. The left wing could use improvement.
i hope you have a nice day <3

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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby change; » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:17 am

LadyDraca wrote:I think your starting off great. MT suggestion would be wind styles, try to make them more similar. Please don't take this offensively as I couldn't even done what you have already. Just trying to help!

Thank you, I actually realized that as well, but I have plans for them :) Thanks for helping.
k2w2 wrote:It's very nice. ^^ Though I agree with LadyDraca. The left wing could use improvement.

Again, thank you :) I'm working on the wings, they are kinda frustrating me. :lol:
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby change; » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:21 am

So, fixed his wing, and now the lines are thicker on one side >_<
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby icykeys » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:28 am

That looks a lot better, no offense. ^^
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby HWL » Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:51 am

Vey wondeful!
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby CSF » Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:47 am

It looks like Charizard XP
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Re: Dragon (A Work In Progress)

Postby change; » Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:01 am

Thank you everyone :)

He was originally a dark purple when I started to color him, but he looked like a grape...so I made him a dark blue.
He still isn't finished, now I have to color the Shadows in again, and clean up the lines, but I'm so close to being done! Ahhh, Finally.
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