[Bℓυ ωιитєя]

Hmmmm. I like how this turned out. It is the story of a she-wolf who was murdered by her mate and had her eye gorged out. Now she is a demon with a evil spirit eye.
Saber stared at her mate, her green eyes fierce with protection.
"Pups are a blessing dear, You will love them!" Saber barked staring up at the large black wolf.
"they are not my pups Saber! I can not love the pups of another wolf." her mate growled in return, his eyes dark as he stepped towards her.
"What are you going todo?" Saber asked her gaze growing fearful as she scrambled backwards, running into the cave wall.
"Something I should have done long ago my dear..." He mumured a wide smile spreading accross his face, a sadistic, crazed smile, filled with blood lust and thirst.
"No you can't. The pups-" Saber screamed, her eyes like orbs as she watched him lift his large lion like paw. It seemed to have drawn down on her like lightning, whacking her accross the cave floor. His claws digging into her eye and gorging it out.

[ClumsyClover]

you could show teeth on itlike growling teeth

[Bℓυ ωιитєя]

Good Idea.

[ClumsyClover]

it looks great so far!

[Ananda Regalia]

Cool, but Youy might get in trouble for all the blood.

[~Nonexistant]

OMG THATS EPIC!!! Its really cool!

[Vestra]

Hello.....Tess! Are you paying attention (no offense) this is worth INTERMEDIATE!!!

[Bynks]

Cool, but Youy might get in trouble for all the blood.

That is possible, but then again to me it just looks like he got done eating a really good dinner. But, again, I tend to think on the more realistic and natural side of most animals and things like that. Animals are messy eaters. >.< Still, even if it is too much blood, very good picture.

[Ananda Regalia]

No I agree that it is very nice I just mean that They can get in trouble for this and I don't want to see that happen

[Bℓυ ωιитєя]

Hahahahaha. Thanks everyone, but its not blood. His eye is glowing, I think I need to work on that a bit better.