| Artist | Mario [gallery] |
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| Drawing sessions | 1 |
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Ananda98777 wrote:Please don't say so? Why? The mods will move it weather people say something or not, at least if people say something you can get tips so you can improve. Feel free to ignore me but I am going to say that this is not intermediate. It isn't. Intermediate is for experienced artists looking for critiques. This very blurry and though in some cases that adds a level of depth to the image in this case it only made it blurry. Eyes are not blended into the face, they have sockets, and a little definition between fur and eye is always a good thing. The mouth should be slightly open if the tongue it out.
BUT, I will say that you did a pretty good job on lighting, though the left eye is too fluorescent. Oh, and a random comment, animal eyes usually do not show white, or at least not alot. The iris will cover the majority of the eye ball.
Your highlighting is alright but it is on the wrong site on the nose.
Please only post here if you can handle criticize (and are at intermediate level)
Sorry for modding here it's just I found it a little rude that they said not to tell them it isn't intermediate. I understand, JUST saying that being annoying, but if you give tips them who does it harm?
THAT'S why.The mods will move it weather people say something or not






Mad♣Hatter wrote:@Ananda98777
Umm..? Why can't you just listen to someone. You don't have to say it's not intermediate, just tell them your critiques. This person probably could handle criticism, you just didn't give them a chance. Please, just listen, and think a little before you crush someone's confidence. Just like patilly said, you don't need to interject. The moderators are perfectly capable.
Ananda98777 wrote:Please don't say so? Why? The mods will move it weather people say something or not, at least if people say something you can get tips so you can improve. Feel free to ignore me but I am going to say that this is not intermediate. It isn't. Intermediate is for experienced artists looking for critiques. This very blurry and though in some cases that adds a level of depth to the image in this case it only made it blurry. Eyes are not blended into the face, they have sockets, and a little definition between fur and eye is always a good thing. The mouth should be slightly open if the tongue it out.
BUT, I will say that you did a pretty good job on lighting, though the left eye is too fluorescent. Oh, and a random comment, animal eyes usually do not show white, or at least not alot. The iris will cover the majority of the eye ball.
Your highlighting is alright but it is on the wrong site on the nose.
Please only post here if you can handle criticize (and are at intermediate level)
Sorry for modding here it's just I found it a little rude that they said not to tell them it isn't intermediate. I understand, JUST saying that being annoying, but if you give tips them who does it harm?
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