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Doggy Puppy Face by Mario

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Doggy Puppy Face

Postby Mario » Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:39 am

If it's not intermediate, please don't say so..
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Re: Doggy Puppy Face

Postby Ananda Regalia » Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:40 am

Please don't say so? Why? The mods will move it weather people say something or not, at least if people say something you can get tips so you can improve. Feel free to ignore me but I am going to say that this is not intermediate. It isn't. Intermediate is for experienced artists looking for critiques. This very blurry and though in some cases that adds a level of depth to the image in this case it only made it blurry. Eyes are not blended into the face, they have sockets, and a little definition between fur and eye is always a good thing. The mouth should be slightly open if the tongue it out.

BUT, I will say that you did a pretty good job on lighting, though the left eye is too fluorescent. Oh, and a random comment, animal eyes usually do not show white, or at least not alot. The iris will cover the majority of the eye ball.
Your highlighting is alright but it is on the wrong site on the nose.

Please only post here if you can handle criticize (and are at intermediate level)

Sorry for modding here it's just I found it a little rude that they said not to tell them it isn't intermediate. I understand, JUST saying that being annoying, but if you give tips them who does it harm?
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Re: Doggy Puppy Face

Postby Mario » Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:49 am

Ananda98777 wrote:Please don't say so? Why? The mods will move it weather people say something or not, at least if people say something you can get tips so you can improve. Feel free to ignore me but I am going to say that this is not intermediate. It isn't. Intermediate is for experienced artists looking for critiques. This very blurry and though in some cases that adds a level of depth to the image in this case it only made it blurry. Eyes are not blended into the face, they have sockets, and a little definition between fur and eye is always a good thing. The mouth should be slightly open if the tongue it out.

BUT, I will say that you did a pretty good job on lighting, though the left eye is too fluorescent. Oh, and a random comment, animal eyes usually do not show white, or at least not alot. The iris will cover the majority of the eye ball.
Your highlighting is alright but it is on the wrong site on the nose.

Please only post here if you can handle criticize (and are at intermediate level)

Sorry for modding here it's just I found it a little rude that they said not to tell them it isn't intermediate. I understand, JUST saying that being annoying, but if you give tips them who does it harm?


The mods will move it weather people say something or not
THAT'S why.
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Re: Doggy Puppy Face

Postby Mad♣Hatter » Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:50 am

@Ananda98777

Umm..? Why can't you just listen to someone. You don't have to say it's not intermediate, just tell them your critiques. This person probably could handle criticism, you just didn't give them a chance. Please, just listen, and think a little before you crush someone's confidence. Just like patilly said, you don't need to interject. The moderators are perfectly capable.
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Re: Doggy Puppy Face

Postby AloisTrancyLuffs » Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:04 am

Mad♣Hatter wrote:@Ananda98777

Umm..? Why can't you just listen to someone. You don't have to say it's not intermediate, just tell them your critiques. This person probably could handle criticism, you just didn't give them a chance. Please, just listen, and think a little before you crush someone's confidence. Just like patilly said, you don't need to interject. The moderators are perfectly capable.

I agree. And crit is nice, but not saying that practically the whole picture needs work. Just don't comment if you want to say something that they told you not to. It's rude.
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Re: Doggy Puppy Face

Postby Lunar Lullabies » Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:00 am

Ananda98777 wrote:Please don't say so? Why? The mods will move it weather people say something or not, at least if people say something you can get tips so you can improve. Feel free to ignore me but I am going to say that this is not intermediate. It isn't. Intermediate is for experienced artists looking for critiques. This very blurry and though in some cases that adds a level of depth to the image in this case it only made it blurry. Eyes are not blended into the face, they have sockets, and a little definition between fur and eye is always a good thing. The mouth should be slightly open if the tongue it out.

BUT, I will say that you did a pretty good job on lighting, though the left eye is too fluorescent. Oh, and a random comment, animal eyes usually do not show white, or at least not alot. The iris will cover the majority of the eye ball.
Your highlighting is alright but it is on the wrong site on the nose.

Please only post here if you can handle criticize (and are at intermediate level)

Sorry for modding here it's just I found it a little rude that they said not to tell them it isn't intermediate. I understand, JUST saying that being annoying, but if you give tips them who does it harm?



I'm sorry, but that's kind of rude. When people post in intermediate, others don't need to go around saying it's not intermediate-worthy. If the mods think it belongs in beginner, then they will move it.
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