Okay well im not sure how to say this but pretty much all I did was make the mouth less thicker and made the eyes the same shape and this was pretty much all your line art, although I would like to say when you are coloring make sure your color is below your lines, if you don't understand here's my example.
Layer 3- Lines
Layer 2-Color Here
Layer 1- Background
Layer 3- Lines
Layer 2-Color Here
Layer 1- Background
