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Redline by Elephant Graveyard

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Artist Elephant Graveyard [gallery]
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Redline

Postby Elephant Graveyard » Tue Sep 08, 2015 4:47 am

A few things

1- the body length was too long so I would say to shorten the back. Only cheetahs usually have that sort of length.
2- Shoulder blades don't usually show on cats unless they're skinny and/or underfed
3- Tails are never long enough to cover the cats height, especially two times. Leopards + subbreeds are excused.
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Re: Redline

Postby rabbit. » Tue Sep 08, 2015 5:13 am

Ohh, okay x3 I don't know much about drawing kittehs ;n;
ew this was ugly
yo im rabbit/weston/salem
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Re: Redline

Postby Elephant Graveyard » Tue Sep 08, 2015 5:16 am

Well it was good for your first oekaki though ^^
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