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Raven+Horse=Fail by swellows

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Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby swellows » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:06 am

Raven+horse=Fail. I can't draw horses to save my life.
Move to beginners if you see fit.
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby Corporal Levi » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:21 am

It defenitely deserves to be here, and it's not a fail! This is wonderful, I love it (:
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby swellows » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:23 am

Fft. Thanks. :3
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby two.stride » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:35 am

Hmm... I like it, but I think your problem is you're used to drawing dogs, so you ended up with sort of a doggy face. Try not giving it as much as a stop in the face, but it's pretty good!:) Also the nostrils might want to be a lttle bigger, and the nose not so pointy. Good job!
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby Safier » Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:58 am

omg that is so not a fail it's cute! Though I think it might be beginners it's still really good! Don't think so bad of yourself you've got an awesome start.
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby Scoobs » Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:52 am

I love your style <33

The muzzle dips in a bit much, but I understand how hard it is to go from dogs to a horses. Next time I would suggest looking at a reference C: I love the sketchiness of it, though <3
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby swellows » Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:54 am

Thanks for the tip. :3
I'll try worki'n on it eventually, but now I'm into human mode :D I just got a new manga book. *jumps up and down*
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby EarthStar » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:14 pm

I really like it, with a little more practice you could draw horses pretty well I bet! A few suggestions for you now...If you draw a line from the end of the jaw to the end of the forelock, the muzzle/nose comes down too low and is too skinny below there. Try making it a bit bigger/wider. Also, with the ears, horse ears come to more of a point almost...like in this picture. Referance pictures help me a lot while drawing, so you could try that too. Other than that I really like your drawing. I can't wait to see more horses!
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby Monstercat » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:35 pm

it's really good! :D
it's just that horses have a more rounded nose
but it's still really good i luv it! :D
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Re: Raven+Horse=Fail

Postby swellows » Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:43 am

EarthStar wrote:I really like it, with a little more practice you could draw horses pretty well I bet! A few suggestions for you now...If you draw a line from the end of the jaw to the end of the forelock, the muzzle/nose comes down too low and is too skinny below there. Try making it a bit bigger/wider. Also, with the ears, horse ears come to more of a point almost...like in this picture. Referance pictures help me a lot while drawing, so you could try that too. Other than that I really like your drawing. I can't wait to see more horses!


Thank you for the help. :3
I would draw more at the moment, considering all this encouragement and tips o.O
but unfortunately, I have to go out and buy a new tablet stylus. :c
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