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It was a lovely, peaceful morning in the plains of the Cimarron, all quiet, no disturbance at all. Mistpelt stood proud on his hill, watching the fillies and mares, then he spots a cougar in the bushes. It pounces out, with no warning, and the fillies run, when suddenly one of them fell over a rock, and was about to meet death. Without noise, Mistpelt growled, and jumps towards the cougar, knocking it on to it's side, he reared to warn the cougar. Thankfully the cougar surrendered, but wouldn't go down without a fight, so it sprinted towards Mistpelt, it's beautiful cream fur shimerring in the sun. Mistpelt jumped in suprise, so he jumped around like a bull in a rodeo, sending the cougar into a nearby rock, and so he reared, hitting just infront of the cougar's head. The cougar decided he was beaten, so ran like a weasel back into the shadows of the bushes.

I suck at stories. ^^' And horses... Tell me if anything needs improving, and if its Intermediate or not.. (Apparently I'm ready for it, according to fans of my Lioness Editable )

EDIT: The spirit ref where he jumps to turn towads the way the cougar stalking is, well.. thats my ref but guess what... I can't find it ANYWHERE! D: Sorry, but thats just a note so mods etc know I used a reference

EDIT EDIT: I didnt do shading because I don't want to ruin it :3

[Lilo.]

[Yay you did spirit art ^^ I luffs you for it! good coouring technique btw]

[GreenDayRock18]

Sounds like spirit! xD awesome colouring but i think maybe you should say that the story is related to spirit, to give the writers of spirit a little credit
Edit: My bad, you did! xD i didnt read all of it!

[nmrn]

[Yay you did spirit art ^^ I luffs you for it! good coouring technique btw]

Thanks, I got the technique from artists I like and are real good, like Chubby and TWG90 etc.... Oh and Tyr I guess

Sounds like spirit! xD awesome colouring but i think maybe you should say that the story is related to spirit, to give the writers of spirit a little credit
Edit: My bad, you did! xD i didnt read all of it!

Thanks, and it is realted cus I had a kind of block, and you're stoopid for not reading it all. Heehee, Joke, you're very crazy and very random and floofy- Ruffles hair-

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..Anyone else like it? D:

[Lilo.]

Me! I count as many ppl

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Me! I count as many ppl

X3333333333

[Lilo.]

[I do though lolz! I have enough hair for six people to have curly, long hair because mine is thatthick, so I count as seven people!]]]]] X33333

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X3333333 Meh

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Does anyone else like it? -Sits in corner waiting-