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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby 2246 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:53 am

This is for intermediate!Its soo cute!=3...<3
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby ghostboy » Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:04 am

Your so sweet, thank you!
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby bugzee » Wed Sep 15, 2010 4:53 am

that is realy good that is case :clap: :D :) :thumbup:
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby ghostboy » Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:53 am

Thanks!
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby Devilish » Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:43 am

Awwwh<3
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"I guess we are who we are for a lot of reasons.
And maybe we'll never know most of them. But
even if we don't have the power to choose where
we come from, we can still choose where we go
from there.”
-The Perks of Being A Wallflower


I made this art for my husband, pls be nice as I do not typically create
for normal humans.
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby nightbeat » Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:26 am

I am so glad that this was moved to intermediate. <33
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby ghostboy » Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:00 am

This was moved! My goodness, thanks to the mod that moved it :3

Thanks Fepa and Devilish.
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby sidereus » Mon Sep 20, 2010 9:31 am

Here is my critque :)
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Pros: Very good detail, nice anatomy, well-done pose, and the collar is excellent. I love the markings on the dog, very well-drawn. Good shading and lighting on the subject.
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Cons: You could use a little more fur detail, not so blurry. The rug and background also should not be so blurry. Might be just me, but the shoulder area could use a little thickening. The eye dots wouldn't stand out so much in real life. You did a good job on the head when making it look against the rug, but the rest of the body looks a little like it's floating.
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Overall: A nice picture, good overall composition and appeal. You could use some practice, but I know most is just from Oekaki's weirdness. ;) Keep practicing and you'll do great! I hope my critque helped!
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby ghostboy » Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:41 am

Thanks for you very long critique.
I will be sure to remember that in the future.
Once again, thanks! I really appreciate it.
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Re: Sleepy Dog

Postby Hiccup » Mon Sep 20, 2010 2:56 pm

this is so cute <3
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