[MistCreek]

Blech. Just Blech. This is Lakea, for Crimsona's contest. I'm sorry about the sucky ness. I will do one more (hopefully better) but for now, this is it. I thought I was going to make the lines smaller, but messed up and had to leave it. I don't rlly like how I made her fur, messy messy, and I will still fix it up a bit. The grass needs a bit more work, as do the mountains. I hope I got the markings right, and I tried pretty hard to shade without messing it up. Timer liez by 10 min. Comments, crits please? Click likey button?

I would rlly like harsh crits and want to know if intermediate? I tried a new style, but it didn't rlly work... Weellll...Lakea belongs to Crimsona, I hope I did okay, and please comment and crit!

[Nasarath]

I really like the grass I think it is terrific but the mountains look very hazy and it seems like a pretty clear day but overall it looks nice

[pacificcc]

Don't say it sucks. Look through my gallery, that sucks! XD Amazing *flails*

[Noctyrn]

I think that this picture is really nice!

Maybe, you could create a separate layer for the grass (above the mountains) , so you don't have those white spots. Overall, I think that the grass is good.

The wolves head is a bit big and the tail is a bit small and un-fluffy. The claws are a bit high up too. But I really like how you made it look like real fur!

I think if you made these improvements, you'd be in intermediate!

[MistCreek]

Wicked: Thanks! Ya, they are pretty hazy lol I used watercolor and tried to make realistic. XD Thanks again!
Canis: aww thanks I bet you r good too, tho. :3 Will look thru gallery!
Dinkleberry111: yay big crits! I did create a seperate layer, but the smudge made it all white n stuff XD I tried to erase, but it was being stupid. Ya actually I re-did her head, so it doesn't quite look right....her tail is SO pathetic tho I was gonna redo the lines like I said but I got messed up. Sorry, still workin on the paws. And thanks! Her fur was fun to do. Thanks!

[paperslit]

I LOVE HER! You captured her personality so well! Thank you so much!

[MistCreek]

Thanks, and you welcome! (not a typo XD)

[The Last Raven]

It's very good overall! (i'm the true failure )

Few pointers: The mountains do look a bit too hazy when everything else in the picture is sharp. She looks like she is sitting on the grass not in it. Her back should have some more highlights because of the sun.

That's all I have to say for that. VERY GOOD JOB though! The grass looks real as well as the fur.

[MistCreek]

ty! The mountains are weird, can't do too much w/ them. And I can't figure out how to make her look like she's in the grass. I didn't want too many highlights because the back color is already super bright. Thanks!

[Mr.Milo]

this is great your drwings of wolves have really improved form your first one!