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my ATTEMPT at a german shepard by demonwolf123

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Time spent 3 hours, 20 minutes
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my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby demonwolf123 » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:14 am

Yeah, didn't turn out as well, any tips for making it better / intermidiate worthy?, please comment oh and take of like an hour and half from the time, i was watching tv for a while lineless german shepard
edit: thanks for the awsome comments every one
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby Lunala » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:22 am

I think it's great! The detail's very good. The color has nice blends, but the neck part should be made a bit more unnoticeable with the separations. If something, you should make smoother lines, and then it'd be intermediate worthy. :thumbup: I'm not sure about intermediate, but I think you could try it. :clap:
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For a lineless draw, it's intermediate, though! I just noticed it was lineless, which makes it better.

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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby kaurisky » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:22 am

I love it that is awesome :thumbup:
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby demonwolf123 » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:30 am

thanks, any one eles, think so?
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby demonwolf123 » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:47 am

can mods move this to intermidiate
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby Lunala » Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:54 am

I'm not sure, but beginner's can be for the experienced, too. It says any artists can draw here. :)
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby 2ShotWhiskey » Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:22 am

I love it! it is absolutely amazing!!! and its lineless too, that makes it look great!
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Re: my ATTEMPT at a german shepard

Postby please delete me. » Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:03 am

I flippin love german shepherds <3
This phase was so awful, honestly I think it was an ongoing joke. I remember constantly laughing my petty ass off at my own stupid and immature shenanigans. Hell, if one can't be terribly awkward, ridiculous, and annoying when they're a small child, starting at the rocky bottom of their awkward journey to maturity, when can they be?

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