[SilentEcho]

Raven blinked, he had just woken up from a long sleep and he didn't feel too good. He lifted his head and looked around, His mother, Queen was sniffing some berries. She looked at Raven "it's a little late" she announced "you better get some food for your little sister".
Raven groaned "but mother..."
"Now!" Queen ordered
Raven mumbled something under his breath and stood up, he walked outside the den, it was sunny and the air was crisp. He smelt the air, there was nothing. His sister needed this food, she was weak but where was he going to find it. "stone" he thought " she has a castle, i'm sure she has servants.. i could beg for food.He started trotting towards the Castle when he saw a new wolf. She was white with gray and silver tips. "hi.." he said shyly.
The wolf ran away without saying anything."i might go see if Silver will come with me" he thought. He started walking towards Silver's den, a rocky hollow where he and his mother and 3 brothers lived. Before he reached the den he saw silver talking to the mystery wolf.
"oh hi Raven!" Silver greeted.

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Is this ok?

[Thickshake]

thats great so far