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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Blubell » Thu Aug 07, 2014 6:12 am

A masterpiece in the beginner's oekaki :D
It is truly an ambitious Pegasus
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby elliot . » Fri Aug 08, 2014 4:58 am

It's amazing!
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Cryptz » Fri Aug 08, 2014 7:37 am

what app did u use?!
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Caela » Fri Aug 08, 2014 8:51 am

Nerushan wrote:A masterpiece in the beginner's oekaki :D
It is truly an ambitious Pegasus


Thank you!! I don't draw horses often but I'm glad to know you think so!

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It's amazing!


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cscollecter12 wrote:what app did u use?!


Chibipaint, of course. =3 It's the only one as far as I know. I use version 2 though.
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Cryptz » Fri Aug 08, 2014 10:44 am

thanks :3 but how did you upload it to cs?
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby ~{Lazarus}~ » Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:07 am

I wish I could draw this good! I will try to get this good now.
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby spooks. » Fri Aug 08, 2014 11:55 am

he only thing i noticed is that the left wing has feathers facing up, while the right on the feathers are facing down.

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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Caela » Fri Aug 08, 2014 1:49 pm

cscollecter12 wrote:thanks :3 but how did you upload it to cs?


Well just go to an oekaki board and click next drawing next to the search area. =3 it doesn't involve uploading.

TheBlondeWithBlueEye wrote:I wish I could draw this good! I will try to get this good now.


Thank you! And just keep practicing! You'll get better!

nmw wrote:he only thing i noticed is that the left wing has feathers facing up, while the right on the feathers are facing down.

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I actually did that on purpose...I just could get it to look right any other way.

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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby crystal gryphon » Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:40 am

Congrats on the feature! You deserve it! Very well done.
I especially love the mane and tail!

There are a few things you need to work on though. VoV
So I'll give you a critique and see if I can help you at least a little. I hope you don't mind!

First thing I noticed was that the legs were fare too short and thick. Horses usually have very long and slender legs. Also the hooves are placed too far back on the legs, and the dent between where the leg ends and the hoof begins shouldnt be there. It makes it look as if the hooves would snap off if the Pegasus tried to walk or run. The hooves themselves are poorly shaped as well.
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Also, the entire shoulder and legs are placed too high. Move them down, and make the shoulder a bit longer(or taller? XD Not wider) too.

The blending isn't too good, but that's mostly a problem with okakai's brushes and blending not being very good. I would try blend those streaks in the best I can, but there's only so you can do. Just try to smooth it out a bit.

The shading is all over the place. You have the basic idea down, but it's difficult to figure out where the light source is.

The wings are a bit difficult to explain, but I'll do my best. I have trouble drawing wings too. They're the absolute worst. :,D
The feathers are too big, there's not enough seperate layers of feathers, and there aren't enough feathers in general. The shape of the wing is strange
Since its easier to explain this way, I put together this for you.(click it to see the whole thing, CS hid some of it.)
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Those are all the issues I see. Everything else looks great. Good job on those muscles, they're hard to do too! :thumbup:
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Re: Flying High (Commission for Snow!)

Postby Caela » Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:08 am

Crystal gryphon wrote:Congrats on the feature! You deserve it! Very well done.
I especially love the mane and tail!

There are a few things you need to work on though. VoV
So I'll give you a critique and see if I can help you at least a little. I hope you don't mind!

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No, no, this is fine! Thank you! I love getting critique and you clearly know what you're doing!


Yes, I noticed the errors in leg shape while I was drawing them but after working on them for awhile, I gave up. I didn't notice the hoof errors though, thank you! Well I saw that they were poorly shaped... but the dent was something I didn't see.

Now that you point it out, that shoulder is just... bleh. I really do need to study anatomy. CD

Well I was actually going for a somewhat unblended look on this. This wasn't intended to be realism, more like a lineless version of my regular style. =3

Ah yes, the shading. Another drawing that lacks a defined light source. I do need to work on that, thank you!

Oh don't get me started on wings! I absolutely hate them! That's why I never practice them. Birds are a pain too. XD I really should just get over myself and and practice them. Thank you for that image though! I'll be sure to look at it often! That was certainly a helpful little paragraph. C=

Some of these errors come from the fact that this is my first time ever drawing a horse digitally.I've never studied equine anatomy either. I find drawing horse to be fun although I never seen to do it... Thank you so much for the advice!
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