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Poison by SodaCurtis&Tex

Artist SodaCurtis&Tex [gallery]
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Poison

Postby SodaCurtis&Tex » Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:35 am

My new charector poison. He is an emo phoenix.
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Re: Poison

Postby SodaCurtis&Tex » Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:23 am

is there anyone who will give me advice to get this drawing into intermediate?
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Re: Poison

Postby Mistress Silent » Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:48 am

You should add shading and little details, like texture. For the eye, look at how a real eye is, or the eye of a bird. You should also blend the black into the green for a neater transition from color to color- or, if that's the intentional pattern, make it more defined and permanent instead of random rounded striped all around, and blend the edge just a bit, seeing as a phoenix would have feathers, making it less than a perfected rounded edge.
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Re: Poison

Postby Army/Navy/Airforce » Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:27 pm

your emo phoenix reminds me of a green toxic. <:|
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Re: Poison

Postby SodaCurtis&Tex » Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:52 pm

Thanks?
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