[~Tornado~]

Hello and welcome <3


What this is

This is a place were you can post your mlp ocs and I will tweak them to make them better so if you are looking for improvement you have come to the right place

Please read!!
.Dont get mad about opinions you posted your pony to get changed not praised
.You do not have to use the change but you are defiantly allowed to as long as you don't take credit for it
. you may only use a certain thing from the change if you want you don't have to take the full revamp
.Do not send me joke ocs I am trying to help people not mess around
.Dont post your oc just to get them on these lines
.I may not have anything to change or might just write a few things it wont always be a picture depending on the oc
.Do not copy me I don't want to see things like this I know how good ideas spread like a wild fire on here

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username:
Pony ref: (I will not take descriptions)
Pony name:
[b]short[/b]bio/personality
anything else?

[~Tornado~]

bump

[sketchy::]

well I'm so embarassed since I even made an OC like Tangle, ><

sername: Sketchy.
Pony ref: (I will not take descriptions) http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=1859025
Pony name: tangle
shortbio/personality:Tangle grew up around Las pegasus,where her parents owned a greenhouse. She left them when she was old enough and went out into the wild to care for wild plants and animals (but mostly plants)
anything else? Yes I know she looks a lot like rarity I'm really sorry, and I'm sorry if she is an eyesore, I made her a long long time ago

[~Tornado~]

well I'm so embarassed since I even made an OC like Tangle, ><

sername: Sketchy.
Pony ref: (I will not take descriptions) http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=1859025
Pony name: tangle
shortbio/personality:Tangle grew up around Las pegasus,where her parents owned a greenhouse. She left them when she was old enough and went out into the wild to care for wild plants and animals (but mostly plants)
anything else? Yes I know she looks a lot like rarity I'm really sorry, and I'm sorry if she is an eyesore, I made her a long long time ago

Finished!

[Detail.]

username: *Shootingstar
Pony ref: viewtopic.php?t=2073436
Pony name: Princess Shootingstar
shortbio/personality- Fun loving, slightly sassy and strict, helping and caring. Grew up in Canterlot with Celestial and Luna,
anything else? Derpderp.

[~Tornado~]

username: *Shootingstar
Pony ref: viewtopic.php?t=2073436
Pony name: Princess Shootingstar
shortbio/personality- Fun loving, slightly sassy and strict, helping and caring. Grew up in Canterlot with Celestial and Luna,
anything else? Derpderp.

finished C:

[~Tornado~]

bump

[P0CKETKNIFE]

Marking!

[wandzie.]

Awesome Idea


username: ~Wanda~
Pony ref: You can read about him in meh Character thread if you need more info

Pony name:
short Minty was quite quiet before he met Wish, she really made him more confident! Now, he's all smiles XD He's laid back and goes with the flow
anything else? He's a male, I hope that's noticeable xD

[bellidan4234]

username: you know me!
Pony ref: [X]
Pony name: Ocean Breeze (can be changed if you think of something better c;)
shortbio/personality: Ocean is an oceanographer who spends her time studying the water near her beach house. She loves to be near the beach, especially to hang out with her few amount of friends and to sun bathe. Ocean is mostly a loner, however she is accepting of most ponies.
anything else? please don't change the colors, I'm fine with them.

username: ^
pony ref: [X]
Pony name: Fire Shadow
shortbio/personality: Evil. Just evil itself. He doesn't have a job, or friends, or any good talent but too pull horrible pranks (so, magic is somewhat his talent). He was adopted, and has a single father and a little sister (whom he broke her front hoof). Also, he has a big crush on Ocean (don't ask, though I'm sure you still remember >;3)
anything else? Just make sure he still looks evil at the end of the revamp >;3