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Re: Noble Roar

Postby bananer » Mon Nov 11, 2013 2:23 am

This looks really amazing! I think that I'm gonna stalk you forever now... <3
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Re: Noble Roar

Postby Mr. Carnival » Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:52 pm

Bananer wrote:This looks really amazing! I think that I'm gonna stalk you forever now... <3


Lol~ Nooo I have to many stalkers now XD
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Re: Noble Roar

Postby Mr. Carnival » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:24 am

Bump
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Re: Noble Roar

Postby bananer » Tue Nov 12, 2013 5:19 am

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Re: Noble Roar

Postby Mr. Carnival » Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:52 am

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Re: Noble Roar

Postby Ruruskadoo » Thu Nov 14, 2013 1:59 pm

Overall good job, especially on the fur and shading. However, there are some issues, so I'll give a bit of concrit. The anatomy needs a bit of work. The top jaw looks badly broken because it's bent up like that. If you look at a wolf's skull you'll see it has a slope with a bit of a dip in it, and it absolutely could not bend upward like that.
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Re: Noble Roar

Postby Mr. Carnival » Fri Nov 15, 2013 2:54 am

Eruru wrote:Overall good job, especially on the fur and shading. However, there are some issues, so I'll give a bit of concrit. The anatomy needs a bit of work. The top jaw looks badly broken because it's bent up like that. If you look at a wolf's skull you'll see it has a slope with a bit of a dip in it, and it absolutely could not bend upward like that.
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The shoulder muscle anatomy is off as well.
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