[LTwoof]

your drawing is super cute <3, really my main two notes are to make the body bigger and even throughout and to keep the ground level the same through out the picture. I tried to keep the redline similar to your style xP

I would give more detailed notes, but I have a lot of things to do xD

[forecast]

Thank you so much ltw <33
I'll keep that in mind next time i draw a jbd >u<

[LTwoof]

Thank you so much ltw <33
I'll keep that in mind next time i draw a jbd >u<

No problem <3

you've got the hang of it, just a few things that need to be touched up on and you'll be a pro!