by Tetra-Alibi » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:53 am
Well, what I think, I don't think it is yet to be intermediate. Why?
The problems:: The whiskers. They look out of place, maybe use some tool to make it look a bit better? Plus they don't look exactly, well, straight. I understand most whiskers are not straight, I was just saying. Along with shading, the shading is a bit... off. Not that much, but just a wee-bit, but that doesn't bug me that much.
What I like:: I like how you made it match a bit with the background. It reminds me of Brambleclaw prowling in through the night, searching for prey, ya know? I like how the eyes are the most, well, interesting part. Why do I say this? Because, it is bright, and usually(what I know of), people like to portray their gaze upon eyes. Although, the eyes are a bit TOO bright. Just darken those very little. Not too much, or it would ruin it completely. I also like how this looks a bit like a painting, I like that. Another thing I like is the pattern. Matches perfectly.
You see, if you fix the whiskers to "fit" then it would work in intermediate, for the shading doesn't matter at the time being. At least, that is what I think. <3
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I hope I didn't cause anyone to be offended by that. o_o; Just trying to help, really.