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Brambleclaw by Yağmur

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Brambleclaw

Postby Yağmur » Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:49 pm

i tried drawing Brambleclaw.i think i made it too drak :? .
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby treekangaroo » Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:51 pm

Really nice!!! :D i think it is Intermediate. It´s really cool, I love the glowing eyes. Maybe you could use the smudge tool to make the whiskers look softer. But it is definitely intermediate i think.
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby major tom » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:02 am

This is. . . amazing! I love it; when I saw it on the Recent Posts in the Oekaki Forum (Or something like that.), I immediately thought of him. You portrayed his appearance pretty well, and I think the darkness suits him. n.n You fool; This definitely (Sp?) belongs in Intermediate!
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby Yağmur » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:11 am

i don't think my drawings belong in Intermediate.the drawings users post there is alot better then mine. :?
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby Arcanine Luver » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:21 am

soooo beautiful intermediate for sure
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby major tom » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:27 am

I see no difference. This qualifies for Intermediate to me, but I could be wrong. . . Whatever topic it is in, this is very good. ^^
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby Tetra-Alibi » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:53 am

Well, what I think, I don't think it is yet to be intermediate. Why?

The problems:: The whiskers. They look out of place, maybe use some tool to make it look a bit better? Plus they don't look exactly, well, straight. I understand most whiskers are not straight, I was just saying. Along with shading, the shading is a bit... off. Not that much, but just a wee-bit, but that doesn't bug me that much.

What I like:: I like how you made it match a bit with the background. It reminds me of Brambleclaw prowling in through the night, searching for prey, ya know? I like how the eyes are the most, well, interesting part. Why do I say this? Because, it is bright, and usually(what I know of), people like to portray their gaze upon eyes. Although, the eyes are a bit TOO bright. Just darken those very little. Not too much, or it would ruin it completely. I also like how this looks a bit like a painting, I like that. Another thing I like is the pattern. Matches perfectly.

You see, if you fix the whiskers to "fit" then it would work in intermediate, for the shading doesn't matter at the time being. At least, that is what I think. <3

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I hope I didn't cause anyone to be offended by that. o_o; Just trying to help, really.
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby Yağmur » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:18 am

i made his eyes brighter on purpose.i just like drawing Brambleclaw,Tigerstar and Hawkfrost with theire eyes that bright.and i'll try fixing the whiskers.
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby Tetra-Alibi » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:21 am

Alright. (: It's just in my opinion. Haha. I'm glad that I could help though. ^^
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Re: Brambleclaw

Postby The Owl » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:23 am

I definatly think this is intermediate. Great job! :D
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