[Annekewren]

"You... Traitor! Bone-barer! Curse you! Blackhearted coward. Villain. Snake. Down on your belly; crawl back to the cave with the rest of your fowl kind. And may you pups be few and blind. Leave now and bare your shame!"

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I'll edit the actual page as soon as my brother and his friend are off the other computer (I can't edit it on this laptop)

Hehehehe, I put a Lord of the Rings reference in there. You get a cookie if you find it

I was up till 4:00 am last night O_o
Again it took way to long to finish, and I have NO excuse. Now I feel bad...
And the dialogue sucks. I had this long speechey thing but I cut it down to just a few lines. I'm so sorry.

[candystars.]

COOL!

[Song & Lyric]

Cant wait till you finish!

[yfish]

This looks interesting!

[~Faith~]

He he can't wait

[NatureHeart]

:3 You made a smart decision. Good wittle artist! Good girl! :3 *Puts away bazooka*

[Annekewren]

*is relieved*

[Insurgent]

xD
This is gonna be awesome, Annek! ^-^

[Annekewren]

Ugh, I can't get the dialogue right. *sobs* This is so frustrating! I know what I want to say but i don't know how to put it in a way that it sounds OK. Not stupid like the stuff I wrote when I first started the comic. (Gods that was terrible! XD)
I'm just wondering if anyone here knows any good tips on dialogue. If so I'd very much appreciate a PM.
Oh... and I've already missed my self-set deadline.
[insert random crazy noise here]! *slaps self on head* "Think, girl, think!!"
LOL

[Kodabomb]

Oh mah glob!! *flails*
I love Coro and Kuda! It's my fav comic. <3