[Joypaw]

I'm sorry I can't draw, but I must practice anyways, for a book. I'm the illustrator of the two of us, and so therefore I want to make a proper book. However, any artistic skills I may have inherited are strictly for drawing on paper; Hopefully I shall eventually be decent at virtual art.. Because otherwise the quality of or book will greatly lessen.

[fruitsandothers]

If I can make a suggestion, make the shoulders smaller, add chest fluff, and add little fluffs here and there. Just add a bit of fur on say, the shoulder. ^-^ Most adoptables usually have them, if you don't understand.

[Joypaw]

Thanks for the tip, I appreciate it. :3 The only reason I don't really draw fur one my sketches is just because I'm lazy, and the shoulder anatomy is in progress for me currently. But I'll keep all that in mind as I practice. :3