[Oddly Shaded]

Ok, so her is my feed back;

So you've got everything pretty much down... But try to follow the reference as much as possible to guide you. Look at what is in relation to what (ie the mouth and the neck etc). Then umm try to use smoother lines rather than more straight lines (ie the back leg). The head was also out of perportion... It still is a little, but the ears needed to be closer to the eyes, and the eyes needed to be closer together. Umm yeah.. The res is pretty much easy to see on the image. Umm... Another thing would be watch the bone structure and musle mass when you draw (for example the from legs). Remember where each bone is and where the musle is as well. But don't mind my terrible paws... They look terrible at the moment.

[Fantelle]

Thank you so much, Odd!
Your redline (blackline) looks great, I'll definitely try to use this feedback for my next drawing.
Thank you! ^^