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Winter Wonder by Puppies4ever

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Winter Wonder

Postby Puppies4ever » Fri May 17, 2013 2:23 pm

This is Kira, my wolf OC. Here she is, standing thoughtfully in the snow and enjoying the nice weather. This is my first time ever in the intermediate oekaki, and I'm really not sure whether or not I deserve to be here, but regardless, I hope you enjoy the picture. Feel free to give constructive criticism!
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby Puppies4ever » Sat May 18, 2013 12:00 pm

Bump! I would love some advice on this? Please?</3
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby TenMomentsTill » Sat May 18, 2013 12:10 pm

All I can think of is the the eyes are a little too high and too far apart. The ears may also be too high up, it's kind of hard to tell since they are not fully on the page. Other than that it's really good, Kira is a very pretty character Puppies4ever.
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby Puppies4ever » Tue May 21, 2013 2:47 pm

Thank you so much for the advice! I agree completely! :) I appreciate the comment! And aww, thank you! ~Pup
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby ultramemer8000 » Sat Jun 01, 2013 1:14 pm

Oekaki is hard when you're new to it XD Lineless is actually easier in oeakaik omg that failed
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby Bruneydog » Thu Jun 13, 2013 4:52 am

Oh, so pretty Pup! I didn't know you had a wolf OC! She looks really pretty, I hope I'll be able to see a full body soon? *hint hint*
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Re: Winter Wonder

Postby Puppies4ever » Mon Aug 26, 2013 8:08 am

Thanks so much, Wish and Bru, and haha, maybe. xD
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