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Art Swap Art Shop ↕ by Rakkun

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Time spent 4 hours, 22 minutes
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Art Swap Art Shop ↕

Postby Rakkun » Fri May 03, 2013 4:05 pm

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Suggestions on anatomy are open
and appreciated :D
Last edited by Rakkun on Sat May 04, 2013 4:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: WIP - Saving for now...

Postby halierae » Fri May 03, 2013 4:20 pm

Lol awesome! What type of animal is it?
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Re: WIP - Saving for now...

Postby Rakkun » Fri May 03, 2013 4:31 pm

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Re: WIP - Saving for now...

Postby halierae » Fri May 03, 2013 4:45 pm

Ah. Here's some suggestions:

Make more fur tufts in back haunches

Head should be stockier (snout just a little teensy weeny bit thicker/rounded)

Back legs= longer

The tail gets skinner as it goes, not smaller at the base and larger in the middle. (It's just barely noticeable)

It's just some friendly advice, quick line changes. You don't even need to pay attention to it if you don't want to XD
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Re: WIP - Saving for now...

Postby Rakkun » Fri May 03, 2013 5:46 pm

Thanks for the Help :D
I'll take everything in consideration besides
the longer legs... Kinda ran out of room on that one >.<
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Re: WIP - Saving for now...

Postby halierae » Sat May 04, 2013 4:20 pm

Thanx for considering, and remember everyone has their own style. So, what I might want to edit, other people think is perfect. Love your red line =)
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Re: Art Swap Art Shop ↕

Postby halierae » Sat May 04, 2013 4:27 pm

Beautiful!
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Re: Art Swap Art Shop ↕

Postby Rakkun » Sat May 04, 2013 5:45 pm

Thank you :D
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