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Nothing Can Put Out These Flames by Puppies4ever

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Nothing Can Put Out These Flames

Postby Puppies4ever » Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:15 pm

Criticism appreciated!:) Please comment, thanks! This horse did NOT turn out how I wanted him to...
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Re: Nothing Can Put Out These Flames

Postby silence. » Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:38 pm

The head of the horse looks a little too small, especially with the thick neck. And, objectively, for both hind hooves to form an almost straight line, one of them would (in reality) wind up being longer than the other. Overall, I think you have talent, but just need some refinement and a little more knowledge in proportions. :) Good job!
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Re: Nothing Can Put Out These Flames

Postby Puppies4ever » Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:51 pm

Thanks for the advice!:) This will definitely help me with my other drawings. I'm usually a lot better at horse anatomy than this, and I realize that the proportions are pretty off with this horse. This horse was actually the result of me being very frustrated with a horse art block, and, in result, posting this fiery horse. Still, you're very right! I have an issue with making horse heads too small. I'll work on that, thanks!
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Re: Nothing Can Put Out These Flames

Postby Bruneydog » Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:24 am

WOAH omg! O_O I love this! :D I agree that the head might be a little too small, but other than that, I was actually a bit stunned when I saw this lol! I think I really like the colors. :)

I actually drew a sketch for a horse rearing the other day too! LOL
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Re: Nothing Can Put Out These Flames

Postby Puppies4ever » Sat Jun 01, 2013 9:32 am

Thanks, Bru! :D Yeah, I agree. And it's so fun to draw rearing horses!!
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