[MistCreek]

Pleez?

[MistCreek]

Wow. I was bumped back faar...

[MistCreek]

[Wolfin]

Sorry, I had a long lie. I've been waking up at 7:30 to then climb and pull myself up and pull other people up.
Anyway, how do you do the anatomy? It's amazing! Is that Moon in the bacground? Whoever it is they're so cute!
Just two story tips;
a) Don't put a shortened version for a name. BC. It doesn't look as professional.
b) Don't use slashes. / makes it look more like a computer chat.
But I can see this is where the plot really develops and there is a big choice to be made. Go or don't go. And the choice decides his fate.

[MistCreek]

THANK YOU! lol nobody has posted which is rlly weird bcause usually i have a couple posts a few hrs after I post it....thanks for the advice, I'll fix those errors! Oh, and no, that's not moon, just a puppy. But I'll try and make moon soon! As for the anatomy, well, I have a bunch of dogs and I have been drawing animals since I could hold a pencil lol but they weren't as good. After awhile I started to notice that animals' legs aren't straight, they have different angles. But I mess up alot with horses and stuff.

[Wolfin]

I can't draw, I write. I'm writing right now in fact. It's a CS fanfic about my Butterfly Wolves.

[MistCreek]

oh, cool! I used to be a great writer, but then I got so busy and had writer's block with EVERYTHING!

[Wolfin]

Here, I've written the first chapter. It's shorter than my orginal stories but meh.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=176849&p=4771994#p4771994

[MistCreek]

Wow bumped back 3 pages in only 3 hrs.

[duckteeth]

I'm just wondering... did you get Dire wolves from the GUardians of Ga'Hoole series? I know the wolves of the beyond are, in fact, called dire wolves and i just felt like asking!