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Redline by RPFLightMyFire

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Artist RPFLightMyFire [gallery]
Time spent 59 minutes
Drawing sessions 2
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Redline

Postby RPFLightMyFire » Tue Apr 16, 2013 7:43 am

My art is very far form perfect but I thought I might as well try to be of some use ;)

1. The nose doesn't really indent, it actually (usually) goes out just a little.
2. The neck shouldn't go out right after it comes out from the cheek bone
3. The eye is a bit low
4. The forelock shouldn't be one but strand, and it should start out bigger and get smaller towards the end.
5. The ears are a bit wide
6. The jaw could use to be lower

It's a beautiful drawing that you made by the way! You're a very talented artist and you should be proud of your work<3
i used to have a neat signature just like i used to think i had my life put together lol
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Re: Redline

Postby Dandeelion » Tue Apr 16, 2013 7:44 am

*-* <3 awesome!
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Re: Redline

Postby JustTheOtherDay » Tue Apr 16, 2013 7:49 am

Thank you! This means a lot to me :)
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