[nivans.piers]

"grr." THe monster roared and ran after the little girl. He bit a tree with his teeth and swung it around meanly.
" Grrr." The little girl cried and she tripped and she hurt her knee. The monster caught her and bit her with his teeth, and she wiggled away and ran away. She was slower because of her knee, and the monster couldn't catch her because he has short arms, and a round head. He has to different size eyes and he could see her goodly. He growled and caught her with his sharp teeth and ate her. the end.


This is the first story my little brother told me. He drew a picture, as usual, and then i asked him to tell me a story behind it. Then, i wrote the story down and re-drew the picture. Which i will be doing more of now.