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I'll make An Actual Readline of your drawing later
I Just Got Impatient because I'm used to drawing Bigger thins so ^^;
Well, Anyways, I thought yours was already pretty good c:
hmm.. The eyes on mine came out too small; On yours I suggest slightly bigger eyes, and the "Paws" Are really Like Fingers with claws. The tail in yours needs to be a bit poofyer at the bottom and the tuft. Otherwise, I thought it was pretty goo C:

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[kirvia]

Thanks. This was very helpful to me. I'll keep those tips in mind.