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FAIL(Comment please!) by wabbidwabbit

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FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby wabbidwabbit » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:42 am

HAHAHAHA, Oh well. I was being really lay! XD

Cits wanted.
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby T.a.r.d.i.s. » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:43 am

That is Really Good!
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby Hollyleaf579 » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:43 am

You're amazing!!! :3 That is G-R-E-A-T!
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby wabbidwabbit » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:47 am

Oh, that was fast and unexpected. Thank you guys so much!
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby BlueKestrel » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:48 am

:3 this looks really awesome! (and it isnt a fail) i would just add more variation of colors between the cheekbone and the ears, it only has a few shades. also use some awesome refs that have extreme lighting they help a lot C:
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby wabbidwabbit » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:51 am

Yeah, when I drew the head, I didn't add ears, so I was halfway into the lighting and I saw there were no ears. So they lack color.
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby HawkFire7 » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:52 am

This is not a fail at all! It's great!!!!!!
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby Camael » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:54 am

It's a nice start, but the eye is too high on the head, and a little small. Your bending is also a little rough, making the horse feel a little flat and cartoony. If you use colors that 'melt' into one another and the blending tool, it will help your drawing to seem a little more realistic. As for the mane, I'd go back in with the eraser and a dark pen with a very thin line width. Overall, however, the drawing shows signs of talent. Keep practicing!
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby Cheeb » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:54 am

This is a fail? It's certainly better than anything I've ever drawn!<33
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Re: FAIL(Comment please!)

Postby wabbidwabbit » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:00 am

Camael wrote:It's a nice start, but the eye is too high on the head, and a little small. Your bending is also a little rough, making the horse feel a little flat and cartoony. If you use colors that 'melt' into one another and the blending tool, it will help your drawing to seem a little more realistic. As for the mane, I'd go back in with the eraser and a dark pen with a very thin line width. Overall, however, the drawing shows signs of talent. Keep practicing!


Thank you for all your help! I'll keep in mind in the future! :D
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