The next page will be better I promise- I'm just super tired right now so it's not as great as it should be /ouo/
Plus the two parts of anatomy I'm worse at are eyes and paws, and being that's the only thing featured here it dosn't look as nice as I'd like.
I'll fix it up later.
I'll practice my dialog too since it's pretty hard to read right now.
Cover
Chap. One Cover
Page One <<You are Here
Page Two
Dialog:
Rei: We are in no position to involve ourselves in a war,
we do not have the same powers as our kin.
Kero: Oh? It's unlike you to object so openly, Rei. Are you worried about your little half-blood?
Rei: You leave my daughter out of this, Kero.
Kero: That mistake of nature can hardly be called a daughter.
-whispering-
Lyira: Let me go, Iya! I'll kill that jerk for insulting my dad!"
(I wanted to write "me and my father" but ran out of room.)
Iya: Shhh!! Lyira they'll hear us!
Plus the two parts of anatomy I'm worse at are eyes and paws, and being that's the only thing featured here it dosn't look as nice as I'd like.
I'll fix it up later.
I'll practice my dialog too since it's pretty hard to read right now.
Cover
Chap. One Cover
Page One <<You are Here
Page Two
Dialog:
Rei: We are in no position to involve ourselves in a war,
we do not have the same powers as our kin.
Kero: Oh? It's unlike you to object so openly, Rei. Are you worried about your little half-blood?
Rei: You leave my daughter out of this, Kero.
Kero: That mistake of nature can hardly be called a daughter.
-whispering-
Lyira: Let me go, Iya! I'll kill that jerk for insulting my dad!"
(I wanted to write "me and my father" but ran out of room.)
Iya: Shhh!! Lyira they'll hear us!
