[.:Willow:.]

i just did a quick scetch of a random pony... i would love some crit! i clearly need it.


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I GET DISTRACTED

[Kaminari]

Very good! Maybe try making the hair a bit more poofy, like not as flat against head. Sorry if that made no sense, I suck at explaining things. Really good though.

[.:Willow:.]

okay note taken i will edit

[.:Willow:.]

okay. i fixed the mane. how is it? any better?

[lesbian]

I suggest maybe adding another front leg! >.< I'm kidding -- It's really good; I'm not the greatest a pony anatomy but I think the wings need to be a little bigger {According to the average pony ration, I guess if this pony has small wings naturally you can ignore this comment! >.<}

[ShadeyPaws]

Please teach me how to do eyes like that
Just a couple of minor anatomical errors... except that its fab c:

[.:Willow:.]

thank you i will get on the wings right away
crescent: are you kidding me? you are awesome at ponys! and their eyeballs. (love dat word) thank you, u so flattering

[.:Willow:.]

wings any better now?

[ShadeyPaws]

Nahh I suck at the actual MLP eyes...
c: I think you are going to be brilliant at this!
Ah... I didn't see this before but something about the neck bothers me a little.... :I
Hm. Not really sure

[.:Willow:.]

what area? i am not sure where on the neck to fix