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Looking for critique by Violetflowers

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Looking for critique

Postby Violetflowers » Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:54 pm

I am looking for some feedback on what i should change to make my horses better. Thank you everyone ^_^
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby wereassassin19 » Sun Dec 30, 2012 4:11 pm

i think it looks really good it may just need some shading
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Violetflowers » Sun Dec 30, 2012 4:12 pm

Thank you ^_^ but I am no good at shading really.. Ill try though
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby GhiraWar » Mon Dec 31, 2012 2:18 pm

I can help you with shading, if you want.
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Violetflowers » Tue Jan 01, 2013 1:00 pm

sure :)
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Twstar » Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:03 pm

I'm not a master artist,but I can help you with a few things:
The head needs to be a little longer
The mouth line needs to be a tiny bit longer
The ears need to be skinnier at the bottom
and here is just a suggestion,horse eyes are ovalish(yes I did say ovalish LOL) so try doing that
example:
http://www.google.com/imgres?q=horse+ey ... =81&ty=284
(copy and paste that in a new link)
Hope these helped great drawing!
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Ourpawprints » Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:04 pm

Very good job, I quite like it. My criticism is that you make the ears rounder, the eye smaller and less slanted to the front, the snout is much longer and the forehead to less high. Also I think you should put some definition of the muscles on the neck and the bones in the face to make it look more realistic. Mainly I would say don't be afraid to look at images of horse faces or skeletons to get an idea of the bone structure.
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Violetflowers » Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:17 pm

thanks everyone ^_^
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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Leaf. » Tue Jan 01, 2013 7:21 pm

Love it.

Maybe you should make it an editable?
Get this to 50+ likes

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Re: Looking for critique

Postby Violetflowers » Wed Jan 02, 2013 7:15 am

:P maybe at some point, I want to improve this a bit more before i do..
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