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Improvement? by staark.

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Improvement?

Postby staark. » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:44 am

I`m trying to improve my doggie draws, is this an improvement?
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Re: Inprovement?

Postby Quitting CS... » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:46 am

Hm, the tail is a bit thin, I would make it more fluffy.
Also I find the paws a bit round so you might want to fix that. The head is a little small, other than that its very good! ^^
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Re: Inprovement?

Postby staark. » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:48 am

Piratepanda wrote:Hm, the tail is a bit thin, I would make it more fluffy.
Also I find the paws a bit round so you might want to fix that. The head is a little small, other than that its very good! ^^

Thanks for the crit!
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Re: Improvement?

Postby Quitting CS... » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:49 am

No problem c:

I really like your shading, by the way!
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Re: Improvement?

Postby staark. » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:52 am

Piratepanda wrote:No problem c:

I really like your shading, by the way!

Thanks, i`ve only just started shading my draws :3
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Re: Improvement?

Postby Doodles » Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:57 am

I have a few friendly tips if you dont mind c:
Try pointing out the nose a tid-bit. Its a little too 'boxy'. And the back neck fur should be like chest fur. Either the chest fur needs to be curly looking like you have the back neck fur, or the opposite. the Back neck fur needs to be like the chest fur.
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Re: Improvement?

Postby staark. » Mon Dec 24, 2012 5:04 am

Now the tail`s fluffier
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Re: Improvement?

Postby staark. » Mon Dec 24, 2012 6:58 am

- - Doodles - - wrote:
I have a few friendly tips if you dont mind c:
Try pointing out the nose a tid-bit. Its a little too 'boxy'. And the back neck fur should be like chest fur. Either the chest fur needs to be curly looking like you have the back neck fur, or the opposite. the Back neck fur needs to be like the chest fur.
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I use a mouse too, really hard to draw!
And thanks, but that`s kinda taking the cartoony look away and I wanted it to have that cartoon face c:
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