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2nd Oekaki by Firefly.

Artist Firefly. [gallery]
Time spent 3 hours, 35 minutes
Drawing sessions 3
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2nd Oekaki

Postby Firefly. » Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:57 am

My second oekaki drawing :/
Critique is welcome!
It's an improvement I guess ^^.No background because nothing looked good. This is all drawn with a laptop mouse pad thing. Yay!
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby I Am Groot » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:04 am

this is really good! my only crit is that maybe use the smoothing tool for the lines and clean up the coloring :)
otherwise, this is amazing
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby Patrick Stump » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:08 am

woah this was drawn with ba laptop mouse pad
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby Koily. » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:22 am

this is amazing! my only suggestion is that you use the blending tool on the mouth and eyes
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby deathlessly » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:49 am

Is this a snow leopard? i loves them <3 deserves a feature
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby Firefly. » Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:53 am

Thank you everyone! And thanks for the tips ^^
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Re: 2nd Oekaki

Postby Chupa-Cabra » Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:05 am

I love this! Only crit I can think of is that maybe the nose is a little crooked XD
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