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Just some practice by Izumi-san

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Just some practice

Postby Izumi-san » Sun Oct 14, 2012 10:23 am

I really like how this turned out. So yeah. I have a ryming poem for it.



I spent so many nights alone
with all these feelings so unknown
I cried for reasons I couldn't explain
and the empty thoughts left a stain

I tried too hard to find someone to care
that in the end, I was left so bare
I was consumed by envy, and spit back out
yet I remained silent, and gave into doubt

I spent so much time trying to build a wall
when in my mind, I was wishing it would fall
I was trying to be different, when I was the same
all that time I was searching for someone else to blame

I needed an exit, from what I fought to keep
but my brittle attempt turned out cheap
I tried to help, but I seemed to cause more tension
so I looked past my words to get a comprehension

I attempted to write, but my paper became soaked
With tears that fell because of memories evoked
I whispered to myself it'll be okay
But my impervious words, began to decay

I spend so many nights alone
with all these emotions now not unknown
I cry for reasons I have explained
and those packed full thoughts, still are stained
My anime hair color is:
PINK!

Bubbly and shy, you like
attention, but not the center.
A little clumsy, you like things
Cute and Simple.
You'll try to help someone Sad or Angry
But sometimes you forget your own feelings.
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Re: Just some practice

Postby justthedoctor » Sun Oct 14, 2012 10:45 am

what the heck ? 2 minutes ????? THATS SO AWESOME 8D
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