[Calla*Ren]

wolf on the watch

[Calla*Ren]

guys is this ok. really i want an honest opinion, and tell me how i can fix it.

[Eren Jäger]

Well, 1, do you use layers?
2) Fangs don't usually show, unless a wolf is baring it's teeth, has a lip problem, is used to showing it's tooth like that, or has overgrown teeth.
3)Your lines are a bit rough. OwO Instead of using straight, use regular. Zoom in on the area you're woorking on, set the smoothness (It's where you change opacity/size) to about 50, and draw. It makes... well, smooth lines. Same for the mountains.

If you want, I can redline/make another version of it, and add your name to the who can edit so you can see what I did. OwO

[Calla*Ren]

sure go ahead

[Calla*Ren]

try not to mess with eyes and noseb to much because thats my only good part that i like

[Eren Jäger]

Okay. C:

[Calla*Ren]

cant wait to see it let me know when its finished

[Eren Jäger]

Alright. ^^ It'll take a few days though, I have other art and school. I did get a start on it, though. :3

[Calla*Ren]

ok take your time.

[Eren Jäger]

ALright, sorry. >< I was going to finish my Halloween card and then work on this, but I'm just going to work on yours until I finish due to my lack of being on. I know you said take my time, but it still makes me feel guilty. ^^

Alright mouse, don't fail me now.