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WIP by T.abby

Artist T.abby [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 3 minutes
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WIP

Postby T.abby » Sat Sep 15, 2012 11:51 am

Posting in hope of critiques. Because it doesn't look right. Mostly the background. Please, can someone tell me how the heck you draw trees? I think my layering is messed up.

HELP?!
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Re: WIP

Postby tolkien quitting » Sat Sep 15, 2012 11:53 am

The left hind paw is at the wrong angle, otherwise, it's really nice!
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Re: WIP

Postby T.abby » Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:12 pm

The Mentalist~ wrote:The left hind paw is at the wrong angle, otherwise, it's really nice!


Yes, that was somewhat intentional, but thank you...how would you fix it?
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A method for determining not who is right, but who is left.

My dreamie is the camo dog, my father is in the army and it would mean a lot to me to get it. I can't trade fairly quite yet, but I'll give you every single pet I own if that's enough.

I live with Flitter and use her computer pretty much exclusively, we may trade unfairly every now and then.

I'm trying to get JBD 54, super excited to start making a great form! Will pay for art or coding help, or offer it in return. :3
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Re: WIP

Postby T.abby » Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:31 pm

Bump. :3
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My dreamie is the camo dog, my father is in the army and it would mean a lot to me to get it. I can't trade fairly quite yet, but I'll give you every single pet I own if that's enough.

I live with Flitter and use her computer pretty much exclusively, we may trade unfairly every now and then.

I'm trying to get JBD 54, super excited to start making a great form! Will pay for art or coding help, or offer it in return. :3
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Re: WIP

Postby tolkien quitting » Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:37 pm

I would draw it so that it sort of points behind the JBD (Is it a JBD?)
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Re: WIP

Postby T.abby » Sun Sep 16, 2012 1:35 am

The Mentalist~ wrote:I would draw it so that it sort of points behind the JBD (Is it a JBD?)


Yeah, it's a JBD. I'll try to fix that if I have the time!
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A method for determining not who is right, but who is left.

My dreamie is the camo dog, my father is in the army and it would mean a lot to me to get it. I can't trade fairly quite yet, but I'll give you every single pet I own if that's enough.

I live with Flitter and use her computer pretty much exclusively, we may trade unfairly every now and then.

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