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Redline... by sabernath

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Redline...

Postby sabernath » Sun Sep 02, 2012 5:48 am

Just a redline for my friend. ^^ I put the redline next to the original drawing because it was kinda hard to see when it was over it...


Okay... Um... I'm terrible at explaining things. XD

Well, first, the ears should be more towards the back of the head. The wings look fine to me, by the way. c: The tail should be a bit more rounded... The legs... I'm not sure how to explain it, but they should be shaped a bit more like how I did the redline, I guess...
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