Since I'm not good at horses at all, I'm asking someone who's experience with horses to redline it for me. Only ask if you know what you're doing, please.
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Hmmmm. Body needs to be longer and a little slimmer. Not too much though that always ends badly. Neck needs to be a little thicker so do front legs. Try to shape the chest to look more muscular. It's quite a good little drawing. Keep trying.
I would red line it for you but I don't have access to oekaki for some reason