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My Very First Drawing by hawkfire123

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My Very First Drawing

Postby hawkfire123 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:07 am

Ohmai, my very first drawing on this site. o.o
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby Chupa-Cabra » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:35 am

This is really good for a first oekaki!
Might I suggest some critique? The ears are a little large, and the eyes are rather human-like. Other than that it's a brilliant piece!
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby Beatnik » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:36 am

I think it's adorable. If big ears and human-like eyes are your style, I say go right ahead. :)
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby Amduscias » Tue Jun 19, 2012 7:54 am

I've always loved animals with big ears (Yet another reason why my fursona is a fennec fox~)
I do my eyes anime-style or human-ish, too, I wouldn't bother with that, it's your style, and a great first oekaki attempt! You'll be in intermediate in no time.
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby Chupa-Cabra » Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:09 am

And the n00bs mistake my advice as bashing yet again.

I was offering some tips, no need to gang up on me.
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:12 am

i think its pretty dang cute! :D

although the right eye on the gray-brown one looks a little strange ;P
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby hawkfire123 » Wed Jun 20, 2012 12:03 am

Thanks guys! Yeah, I like doing the big eyes and ears, though I'll try to improve as best I can! :D And I think the right eye looks a bit strange because the poofy fur that I do is covering a bit of it. :3
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby ~SNCastiel<3~ » Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:16 am

hawkfire123 wrote:Thanks guys! Yeah, I like doing the big eyes and ears, though I'll try to improve as best I can! :D And I think the right eye looks a bit strange because the poofy fur that I do is covering a bit of it. :3

ohhh its the hair! well than it looks just perfect to me! :3
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Tread softly, because you tread on my dreams.
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby Amduscias » Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:08 am

Wicked Whisper wrote:And the n00bs mistake my advice as bashing yet again.

I was offering some tips, no need to gang up on me.

Excuse me, there was NO reason to call us noobs. We weren't "ganging up" on you, but we were offering critique of our own on the same subjects you brought to the attention of the thread.

On another note, I am a fairly old member, and even though you are a *much* older member, the majority of us are NOT newbies.
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Re: My Very First Drawing

Postby F R E E ; » Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:15 am

This is great!! This is so much better than my first drawing on here! Bravo on this! And I dissagree about the large ears and human eyes, they are adorable!
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