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Practicing Eye and Fur by MoonApple

Artist MoonApple [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 3 minutes
Drawing sessions 4
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Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby MoonApple » Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:39 am

Comments, crit?
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby caress. » Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:56 am

Beautiful! The only thing I'd suggest is smoothing out the black around the pupil of the eye. :3 And as to make sure I don't confuse, I'm talking about the part that touches the fur; the outer shape! :3

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I'm wasted, losing time
I'm a foolish, fragile spine
I want all that is not mine
I want him but we're not right

In the darkness I will meet my creators
And they will all agree, that I'm a suffocator

I should go now quietly
For my bones have found a place
To lie down and sleep
Where all my layers can become reeds
All my limbs can become trees
All my children can become me
What a' mess I leave
To follow

In the darkness I will meet my creators
They will all agree, I'm a suffocator
Suffocator
Oh, no

I'm sorry if I smothered you
I sometimes wish I'd stayed inside
My mother
Never' to come out
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby MoonApple » Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:04 am

Ok! Thanks!
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby izauura » Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:04 am

Beautiful Natari!
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby MoonApple » Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:05 am

Done!

And thx Monster!
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby caress. » Wed Jun 13, 2012 10:44 am

This is so pretty! ._. Will you make a full wolf face out of it?
O 3 O

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I'm wasted, losing time
I'm a foolish, fragile spine
I want all that is not mine
I want him but we're not right

In the darkness I will meet my creators
And they will all agree, that I'm a suffocator

I should go now quietly
For my bones have found a place
To lie down and sleep
Where all my layers can become reeds
All my limbs can become trees
All my children can become me
What a' mess I leave
To follow

In the darkness I will meet my creators
They will all agree, I'm a suffocator
Suffocator
Oh, no

I'm sorry if I smothered you
I sometimes wish I'd stayed inside
My mother
Never' to come out
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby MoonApple » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:03 am

sure!
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby ksk814 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:04 am

AWESOME :D :D :D :D :D :D :D i am jealous!!!! :D :D :D :D
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby ksk814 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:05 am

AWESOME :D :D :D :D :D :D :D i am jealous!!!! :D :D :D :D
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Re: Practicing Eye and Fur

Postby niccigirl » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:36 am

AWESOMESAUCE.
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