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My gallery · by **LOCW_Bluestarwarrior** » Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:41 am

Yay! Finally finished this! For some reason, I don't like it as much as I thought I would...

My gallery · by **Solarizing** » Tue Jun 12, 2012 2:58 am

Wow, it looks great LOCW! =D I have a bit of critique for you...

~ The body is a bit skinny and long, cats' bodies are usually a little more chubby
~ The green squares should probably cover the entire background, the left side looks amazing but the right side looks like you just got sick of drawing squares and stopped xD
~ The wings (love the wing design, btw!) should be coming more from the shoulder blades, yours kinda look like it's floating above his neck. Also the left wing should be a bit smaller since it's farther away.

Other then that, it's wonderful! <3 8D

My gallery · by **Aracenae** » Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:02 am

THAT is AWESOME.

My gallery · by **LOCW_Bluestarwarrior** » Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:28 am

Thanks. And yeas, Sola, I may edit later.

My gallery · by **amithethird** » Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:12 pm

I think the wings look fine.

I have the feeling they're supposed to be floating like that.

My gallery · by **Ellies** » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:12 pm

Wow This is so ... WOW

PRH · by **Muttz** » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:13 pm

Its nice!......and Cute!

My gallery · by **LOCW_Bluestarwarrior** » Thu Jun 14, 2012 10:31 am

Thanks! And yes, the wings are suppossed to be floating, they're the only bit of the drawing I like...

My gallery · by **~Rush Furry~** » Sun Feb 24, 2013 9:36 am

I love it it's one of my personal faves

My gallery · by **LOCW_Bluestarwarrior** » Sun Feb 24, 2013 9:41 am

XD Thanks, I should redo this.

Artist	LOCW_Bluestarwarrior [gallery]
Time spent	1 hour, 50 minutes
Drawing sessions	4
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