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Darkfur's Eye *old* by neonlyrics

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Darkfur's Eye *old*

Postby neonlyrics » Thu May 31, 2012 10:42 am

I'm so inspired by Erin Hunter and the Warriors series that I'm writing my own series of those books (using different characters) and this is one of the main characters. She's Darkpaw in my story now, but at the end of the book she'll be announced a warrior. I like to draw simple things like eyes, so I thought I'd do her eye. Tell me what you think, and enjoy. :thumbup:
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Re: Darkfur's Eye

Postby Kyla Springer » Thu May 31, 2012 10:48 am

I really like it but I would use smoothing and redo the line under the line
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Re: Darkfur's Eye

Postby b a d . w o l f » Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:19 am

deeth wrote:I really like it but I would use smoothing and redo the line under the line




Puh-lease!!! My sisters artwork is fine!!!! Goodjob sis!!!


I think it is funny that you used your own warrior name!!! ;3 Plus,I also think it is nice that you used Lightningstar, for lightning is my first part in my Warrior name!!!!!
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Re: Darkfur's Eye

Postby Kyla Springer » Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:55 am

You don't have to say that she said to tell her what you thought so I did. Also critique is just a suggestion.
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