[neonlyrics]

I'm so inspired by Erin Hunter and the Warriors series that I'm writing my own series of those books (using different characters) and this is one of the main characters. She's Darkpaw in my story now, but at the end of the book she'll be announced a warrior. I like to draw simple things like eyes, so I thought I'd do her eye. Tell me what you think, and enjoy.

[Kyla Springer]

I really like it but I would use smoothing and redo the line under the line

[b a d . w o l f]

I really like it but I would use smoothing and redo the line under the line

Puh-lease!!! My sisters artwork is fine!!!! Goodjob sis!!!


I think it is funny that you used your own warrior name!!! ;3 Plus,I also think it is nice that you used Lightningstar, for lightning is my first part in my Warrior name!!!!!

[Kyla Springer]

You don't have to say that she said to tell her what you thought so I did. Also critique is just a suggestion.