[Wolfie♥Louis]

Hey yalll,

Just messin' around because I am bored, this is a WIP horse, I am experimenting with realism and lineless, please feel free to leave comments and crit ^^ I am thinking on adding the rest of the horse as well as its head, opinions?

Wolfie.

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Ohh , I love the highlights on the neck.
For crits, here's a good reference before I get started and confuse you. ouo
I'd say that the cheek should come forward a bit more. It's a tad too narrow. Unless of course, you're drawing a horse that that is angled differently. It looks as though you're drawing it from the side view, but I could be wrong . |D
Anyways , all these crits are coming from the assumption that the horse head is a side view.
So.
The forehead's an odd shape. Horse heads are usually a straight line, with a slight curve to it. But it's usually all curvy. Like an arabian for example. The top of a horse's ears is quite thing, so maybe you could thin the top down a bit and then make a base a bit wider ? c:
I really love the eye you did. It's quite pretty(:
But , horse eyes are more of a triangle shape. Your horsie also need eyelids, haha.
If you were to make the cheek a little less narrow, the middle of the face would be a little too short , so I'd suggest making the face longer too. Also, for the mouth, it's way too high up. The nostril is also a bit small, I think. The ref should give you a pretty good idea of what i mean, I think.

All in all, I love your shading. Especially on the face. :') <3

[wolfsrainfan]

Beautiful.... good job!

[Wolfie♥Louis]

Ohh , I love the highlights on the neck.
For crits, here's a good reference before I get started and confuse you. ouo
I'd say that the cheek should come forward a bit more. It's a tad too narrow. Unless of course, you're drawing a horse that that is angled differently. It looks as though you're drawing it from the side view, but I could be wrong . |D
Anyways , all these crits are coming from the assumption that the horse head is a side view.
So.
The forehead's an odd shape. Horse heads are usually a straight line, with a slight curve to it. But it's usually all curvy. Like an arabian for example. The top of a horse's ears is quite thing, so maybe you could thin the top down a bit and then make a base a bit wider ? c:
I really love the eye you did. It's quite pretty(:
But , horse eyes are more of a triangle shape. Your horsie also need eyelids, haha.
If you were to make the cheek a little less narrow, the middle of the face would be a little too short , so I'd suggest making the face longer too. Also, for the mouth, it's way too high up. The nostril is also a bit small, I think. The ref should give you a pretty good idea of what i mean, I think.

All in all, I love your shading. Especially on the face. :') <3

Thank you so much, this is so useful ^^
To clear your suspicions I am drawing from a horse at a side view, its just a little magazine snippet, I posted it now so you could see
Thank you for your advice, I think I will try to improve it to your standards if I can ^^ It was really kind of you to say all this stuff, it means a lot.
Wolfie.

[naturalharmony.]

A.MA.ZING! This is brilliant Wolfie! Once again you amaze me with your talent! And I mean it, I never lie to make somene feel good. you're art is fantastic!

[Wolfie♥Louis]

Snow Leopard you are possibly one of the kindest people I have met on Chicken Smoothie, thank you so much <3 You are too amazing for words ^^

[naturalharmony.]

Snow Leopard you are possibly one of the kindest people I have met on Chicken Smoothie, thank you so much <3 You are too amazing for words ^^

Aww. I just like posting on topics that deserve love. lol. ^^ I stalk your gallery alot if you haven't noticed yet...

[Wolfie♥Louis]

Hahahahaa really? I didn't notice, I didn't really think my art was all to popular at all ^^ Daww you are so sweet though.

[naturalharmony.]

Hahahahaa really? I didn't notice, I didn't really think my art was all to popular at all ^^ Daww you are so sweet though.

I think your art should get way more posts then it gets now! That's why I post on it because i'm your art stalker!

[Wolfie♥Louis]

I've never had an art stalker, wooo this is soo exciting!!! OMG :0