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Redline by *QUIT*

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Redline

Postby *QUIT* » Sat May 05, 2012 7:49 pm

A few things:

1.
A wolf(and most animal)'s jaw is rounded. It won't be pointed like that. And unless you are drawing a very thick winter coat of fur the furs stays in line with the body.

2.
The muzzle needs to be a bit more square. But that could just be your style.

3.
The forehead and muzzle should be parallel to eache other at a sideview.

Otherwise, it's great! I can't think of anything else to touch up with this :D
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Re: Redline

Postby buni » Sat May 05, 2012 8:33 pm

Ah! Thanks so much! This has realy helped :D
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